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Opening large lobster(首战大龙虾)


咱在世界的某个角落~ 我恨小荷

  累死我拉。.为了这文。.花了昨天一天的时间呢。.呼。.高级速度推荐哇…
  This afternoon, I saw mother home from school, like the lobster challenge my heart, have recently, also want to personally pack those majestic lobster.  
  I walked around a triple jump to my mother, said: "mom, mom? Tonight lobster: wonderful! I'll help." pack lobster, Mother said: "no, the big lobster GaShang you. Would pliers." Help me dead to tie, mother finally agreed, and left me with five big lobster, let me try by the lobster. I squatted down body, to dress in the basin the lobster said: "I'm coming! Ha ha!" This only big lobster and weakness, waving head big pliers, stare at my eyes, as if to say: "ah, ah… see who fear." My right hand picked a lobster two jolly lift it out with hard up, lobster, it wants to bite my big pliers, how also reach of my hand. I very satisfiedly say: "hum, see how you bite me." When I left knead its tail, panasonic right want to head off when it's armor, lobster, with bent towards the left thumb I pinched it in a clip ruthlessly. "Oh!" I ache to yell, immediately lost it. Mom, I heard in the clip by lobster and lovingly says: "caught lobster in head knead, so it is not the big pliers." you clip While I do pick up a demonstration. My mother's appearance, according to catch this lobster, hey hey, lobster, want to ShuaWeiFeng, but powerless. I pinched tight lobster waist, stretch hand to head off the armor, it big lobster waved large pliers defense, let me. I put it into the big pliers, according to give it said: "listen, down." It is indeed very obedient down my hands down, but my hand a loose it "freeloaders". And I put it down, but when I want to head off when it's armor, it just like like into defense quickly. Such a war, maybe four or five and lobster tired, maybe I wasn't hurt several times before it, for I was relaxed vigilance. When I was in the sixth, when attacking big lobster no defense. Ha! Is there! I sticking to the big lobster, helmets, fast off, big lobster is finally I lost. I receive good big lobster into the dish. The success of the complete, and the rest of the several big lobster I tidy up quickly. I receive good big lobster to mom, mom compliment I say: "today, triumphant return, lobster, wars celebrate tonight, you reap good big lobster with good reward our little hero."   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  In the evening, I eat his pack, feel particularly sweet the lobster.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
PS:累死我拉。.为了这文。.花了昨天一天的时间呢。.呼。.高级速度推荐哇…

 
 
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