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My beautiful vacation


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  I had a beautiful vacation on last year.I went to Beijing city with my  
  best friend,Tina.We took a train.It was very long and took me 3 hours.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  First, we went to the KFC. Then,we ate two cups of ice cream and had   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn
  two sandwichs.After breakfast,we went to a zoo.Tina saw a koala.It was very  
  cute! And I saw a panda.Panda was smart.Next,we went to the Great Wall.  
  There were many people and there were really busy! After thet,I went to  
  an aquqrium with Tina.First,we watched a movie octopus.Then,we watched a  
  seal show.It was very beatiful!Next,we ate a Beijing'Duck.After lunch,  
  we went to a Gift Shop and bought a gift.Next,we saw a singer,Jay Zhou.  
  I had his autugraph.We really very happy!  
  My vacation was beatiful!

 
 
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