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My bedroom


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  My bedroom is small,There is a desk in it,The desk is in front of the window.There is a light and a clock on the desk.Near the desk there is a chair.I do my homework there everyday  
  I have some clothes.They are in my cliset.The closet is to the left of my bed.The bed is beside the wall. The wall is white.White is my favourite colour.On the wall there are some pictures.Thare very beautiful ones.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  My bag is behind the door.my shoes are under the bed.Everything in my bedroom is clean and tidy.   小 荷 作文网 www.zww.cn

 
 
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