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My friend


实验中学 深蓝涩

  我知道有英语老师,我该上初一了,写的不好,看下。抢沙发5分
  My frided is very good boy.His name is Jack.Ben.He's a student.His mother is a teach,his father is a civil servant.He has a brother and a sister,they are student,too.He has a uncle, Johnny. He likes his uncle!Because his uncle likes to take him to the park to play.The most painful of his people is his aunt. His aunt didn't come back once a week, will bring him gifts, all he also liked his aunt.They have very good at ordinary times family, no contradiction, the very harmonious.  
  Jack.Ben has big eyes and samll mouth.His hair is short and his nose is big.He can piay the piano. But he can't piay the drums.He likes piays tennis very much.But he don't like football. Because the football to play too tired.He likes to eat hamburgers and Chinese food, but he does not like to eat British food.   小荷作文网 www.zww.cn
  We are good feident.Do you like him?

 
 
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